You Have Recently Started Work In A New Company

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You Have Recently Started Work In A New Company

Dear Ross,
I am writing to inform you that I have resigned from Google and I joined in Microsoft as senior software developer from October 1st 2022 which I had informed you that reason for resignation was seeking a new challenging role.
Surprisingly, I am excited to inform you that my current working environment is far better than while I was in previous company because all my peers have culture of understanding that how a new bee faces the situation in new office although I got an opportunity to work in morning shift so that I can keep healthy life style with physical exercise in evening. Besides that, the client which I suppose to give support is the company located in your country especially from your local area.
Apart from all above, I had met one of our old friend which we were working together during the pandemic and I hope you got an idea that to whom about I am talking.

Yours Faithfully,
Raju

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, while, apart from, i suppose

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62424242424 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61579577022 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 16.3608247423 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.138129109 44.8134815571 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.6 76.5299724578 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 16.8248392259 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 4.34317383033 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247986444544 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102992187992 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08355708162 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154782301299 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620384540672 0.0580467560999 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 8.37731958763 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 8.62886597938 330% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 8.54432989691 178% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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