Some people say that all popular TV entertainment programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

There is no denying fact that the phenomenon of presenting Television Program is ubiquitous across the globe due to its paramount important. One school of thought opines that it is worthless, however others consider that a couple of problems also occur because of the same. Although, it has plethora of merits, yet numerous demerits are also there which will be elaborated in upcoming paragraphs
Initiating with best possible benefits, the most significant advantage is almost all the peoples in this world has their own Television and it has connected with the cable network to watch all the news and entertainment while they sit in their home so that it easy to convey social matters to everyone through this channel which has impacted in human life along with the short span of time. To cite an example, every day evening peoples were so eager to watch television to get an update about the COVID-19 epidemic and lockdown information. As a result, everyone was updated and kept social distance to prevent of being an affected by this disease and more often everyone understands the important of being vaccinated.
On the paradoxical side, there are many drawbacks as well first and foremost, these channels give less important for social matters because it affects their profitability and they are not ready to broadcast severe information such as smoking and drinking alcohol is injuries to health, which affects the young generations and the country unless it strictly informed by the rules and regulations.
To conclude, without any doubt, this is a mixed bag. If this topic has many positives, then the negative points of this notion may not underestimated.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 12, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
Suggestion: with the best
...ated in upcoming paragraphs Initiating with best possible benefits, the most significant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10583941606 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75235962586 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627737226277 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.736435112 49.4020404114 303% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.875 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.25 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135967824914 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472368648174 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402705623312 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640235612106 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580969391289 0.056905535591 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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