Some people say that all popular TV entertainment programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Opinions are divided on whether all famous TV shows should focus on adding educational content to create awareness about pressing social issues. I believe that the addition of such content should not be applicable to all entertainment programmes, and watching and creating any type of shows should be viewers' and producers' personal choice.
Although it is generally thought that all television series should create awareness about social issues. In fact, this is not fair to viewers and directors. With regard to the former, people watch television as an escape from their daily life and use it as a tool for relaxation. It would be completely unfair to them to watch educational shows when they actually want to enjoy their time by watching sitcom or cartoons. The same applies to the directors as they would be forced to incorporate ideology around social issues in every TV show they direct. Not only would this limit their freedom but also kill their artistic expression and creativity.
It is also true that broadcasting controversial social issues on television would spread negativity in society, which means that viewers would be adversely affected. This is due to the fact that some issues such as LGBTQ are so sensitive to be discussed in daily soaps. It may also incite hatred and fuel violence. Even sometimes it is difficult for directors to present an unbiased opinion and create such content that the feelings of viewers are not hurt. This situation could be avoided by not creating content that contains such sensitive information on social matters.
In conclusion, all TV shows should not be forced to have educational content related to social issues. On the contrary, viewers and directors should be free to watch and create any show they would like to.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, even so, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the contrary, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0819112628 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65252055569 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508532423208 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7306241666 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203283867782 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779452860351 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490916670726 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141233074318 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270695748822 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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