Some people believe that educational qualifications always bring success, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether academic qualifications always bring prosperity. I believe that it is not always the case, and many individuals do not attain success even after getting higher education.
The idea that formal education always makes a person successful, is advocated by people on the basis of job and business opportunities. With regard to the former, the belief is that professional courses in the fields of computer science, medical and engineering, open up a pathway to get high salary jobs, which otherwise, would not be possible without any educational degree. As far as business opportunities are concerned, It is also thought that an educated person brings innovation to business with his unique ideas and critical thinking. Therefore, an educated mind enables an individual to become a successful entrepreneur.
However, the above arguments can be rejected because these do not apply to everyone. As for the job aspects, it is not guaranteed that one would always get a job even after passing a university exam with flying colors. Evidence for this can be seen in the fact that in many developing countries, the number of qualified engineers is higher than available job vacancies, and they fail to get job offers. As for the idea that educational training opens up new business opportunities, it might be true for someone with the financial resource available to implement his ideas. But for those who manage to pay their education fee, either by taking an education loan or by doing part-time work, it is not possible to set up a business with limited funds.
In conclusion, I reject the idea that educational degrees always bring good fortune as this proposition is not applicable to everyone because of unemployed educated engineers, and lack of financial resources to start a business.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, as for, in conclusion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16554054054 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97447558772 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574324324324 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9827721447 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.416666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151166721028 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659734088766 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572690581098 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117480353103 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061554442858 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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