You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with the family for six months and look after their six-year-old child.
Write a letter to their parents. in your letter
explain why you would like the job
give details of why you would be suitable to employ
say how you would spend your free time by you are in Australia
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in babysitter job that I have seen in Perth Today magazine on 19 April edition.
At this present time, I am living in India and I love to spend time with children. Moreover, I have keen interest to learn about Australia culture, so this will be the golden opportunity for me to explore myself with native people and know about the customs and traditions there.
I am professional caretaker as I have done two years course in Nanny. I went to Dubai for one year to babysit three children. I will give you best service towards the care of baby. I know how to handle the offsprings in absence of their parents.
I got to know from your advertisement that you live in Perth and your child goes to school for five hours daily. I will devote my that time for learning english in school in order to communicate fluently. Apart from this, my sister lives in the same city. I will go to her house for spending some quality time with her.
I am looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Susan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'edition' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'editions'.
Suggestion: editions
...een in Perth Today magazine on 19 April edition. At this present time, I am living ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th Today magazine on 19 April edition. At this present time, I am living in Ind...
^^^
Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...for one year to babysit three children. I will give you best service towards the ...
^
Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'you the best'.
Suggestion: you the best
... to babysit three children. I will give you best service towards the care of baby. I kno...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... best service towards the care of baby. I know how to handle the offsprings in ab...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...springs in absence of their parents. I got to know from your advertisement tha...
^
Line 9, column 114, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ld goes to school for five hours daily. I will devote my that time for learning e...
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Line 11, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... time with her. I am looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Su...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48469387755 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43560869448 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627551020408 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.050670125 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6153846154 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220502851751 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725509998457 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443060123794 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115592137961 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033597967341 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.