You have seen an advertisement in Australian Magazine for someone to live with a family for 6 month and look after their 6-year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In this letter :
• Explain why you would like the job
• Give details of why you would be a suitable position to employ
• Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia.
Dear Mr and Mrs Collins
My name is Martha. I have seen your advertisement in a magazine and I’m writing to you because I would like to be considered for the position you are offering.
I really would like to be considered for the position you are offering. I really would like to work for you because I think it will be a good experience for you and me. I like to travel, know about different cultures and meet new people. I have never been to Australia but I’m pretty sure there are a lot of thing to see and try. I have previous experience looking after children.
Currently I am working for an Irish family and I take care of for children whose ages vary from three to eight. I have to say that I’ve never thought that looking after children would be that rewarding. I enjoy spending time with them with them and I have learnt a lot. I am really patient, tidy, reliable, and hard working.
In addition, I have just completed an first aids course. If I had the chance to live with you, I would spend my free time learning English, visiting tourist attractions, trying local food and making new friends.
Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. Pleease feel free to contact me if you need further details and recommendations.
Best regard,
Martha
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ered for the position you are offering. I really would like to work for you becau...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ll be a good experience for you and me. I like to travel, know about different cu...
^
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...different cultures and meet new people. I have never been to Australia but I’m pr...
^
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of things'.
Suggestion: a lot of things
...Australia but I’m pretty sure there are a lot of thing to see and try. I have previous experie...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...here are a lot of thing to see and try. I have previous experience looking after ...
^
Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'with them'.
Suggestion: with them
...e that rewarding. I enjoy spending time with them with them and I have learnt a lot. I am really pa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...them with them and I have learnt a lot. I am really patient, tidy, reliable, and ...
^
Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ng. In addition, I have just completed an first aids course. If I had the chance ...
^^
Line 6, column 131, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...ed further details and recommendations. Best regard, Martha
^^^^^
Line 8, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d recommendations. Best regard, Martha
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52965467886 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573275862069 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7625876482 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.25 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402946152549 0.216113520407 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119947954878 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114949496829 0.0603063233224 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192785832513 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114172184628 0.0580467560999 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.