You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
explain why you would like the job
give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Dear Sir/Mam,
I am writing this letter in response to an advertisement which I had seen yesterday. The advertisement mentioned that an Australian family is looking for a babysitter for six-months to look after their six-year old child. And, I would like to apply for the job posted in the form of advertisement in the magazine.
I render a great service in taking care of kids because I had been professionally trained by one of the baby care institutes in my country. Besides, I have a good experience in raising a couple of younger siblings as the eldest child of my family. Plus, I love children and I consider them to provide a bundle of joy with various kinds of extra-curricular activities which will beneficial for your child in the future.
Moreover, in my leisure time, I would like to explore the culture and tradition of Australia as I like to enjoy new places as I am a traveler . You can check my travel history photographs which I have attached with this letter. Also, I have never visited Australia and it is in my travel bucket list. Therefore, I thought, it would be a best opportunity for me to travel Australia for six-months where I can work and see your country's culture , tradition, music, and exotic beach islands.
I hope that I will be selected for the vacant position of babysitter as per my experience which I have mentioned above.
I am hoping to hear a positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e to enjoy new places as I am a traveler . You can check my travel history photogr...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...list. Therefore, I thought, it would be a best opportunity for me to travel Austr...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...I can work and see your countrys culture , tradition, music, and exotic beach isla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, look, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7609561753 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98287278221 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569721115538 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2443726273 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9230769231 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342618913587 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105209513497 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110711072485 0.0603063233224 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155095920154 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16851048011 0.0580467560999 290% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.