Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you in regards to the advertisement posted in Australian Magazine on 01/01/2023 to take care of child 6 months’ old. My name is Sonia Singh and I live in Australia since 2020 hence, I would recommend me to take this job.
I have completed my Nursing Degree from Karnataka Nursing council and I have an experience in Pediatric care specially to take care of new born babies as I have been working in baby care in Perth. Since I move to this city I did not get an opportunity either working in baby care or day care.
However, if you give me a chance to take care your baby, you would not have to worry about either his/her medical nor food because I spend my free hours in maternity hospital to offer a voluntary service to bath and care for new born babies. In addition to this, I got an award from local chairperson for the best volunteer for the year 2022.
Yours faithfully,
Sonia Singh
Sydney
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 21, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you in regards to the advertisement posted in Australian ...
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Line 4, column 205, Rule ID: TO_BATH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to bathe'?
Suggestion: to bathe
...y hospital to offer a voluntary service to bath and care for new born babies. In additi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4450867052 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53308489696 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612716763006 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.7046757647 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.857142857 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 16.8248392259 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216258965487 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955335083329 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559267160373 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153855025283 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692214541915 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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