Internet, being a source of information is helpful for the public, however, it is not free from disadvantages what are the disadvantages
It is fact, that internet had a inspirable source of information in the contemporary world. Obviously, it has disadvantages and advantages. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of internet in the current society.
The foremost advantages of internet is, it gives us instant access to information on almost any subjects. By the innovation of internet almost all the people keep in touch by email or instant messaging services, and moreover it helps the people to know plethora of news around the world. Video messaging and video conferencing are the most benefits bestowed by the invention of internet. Example, it is not neccessary to have the personal presence of individual to conduct conference and interviews and other conversations by the help of internet.
Shops and other online services are now at fingertips with the help of internet. People purchase goods and services from various parts of the globe within a limited time which was not possible in the past. Example. Electronic ticket is an example for online
On the other hand it is not possible to ignore the negative side of internet. There are some drawback also because of internet. It is harmful for the future of children with the access of some website. For instance, website like youtube allows the young people with videos about ponography since parents find it difficult to control what their children watch online. Moreover, internet fraud have become a common feature these days and many people become victims for hacking. For example hackers hacking the confidential matters of reputed companies and secret passwords of commercial sites.
To conclude, internet has benefits such as helps a source of information. It makes some merits and demerits in the society. Which leads to chaoes.
- In schools and university girls tend to choose art subjects while boys choose science subject What is the reason Should the trend be changed 78
- Some people argue that it is better to be unemployed than to be employed in jobs they do not enjoy To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Educating young people is naturally important However some think governments ought to invest more on education for adults in need To what extent do you agree or disagree 74
- The best curriculum is not one based on a static body of knowledge but one which teaches students to cope with change To what extent do you agree or disagree 41
- You Have Recently Started Work In A New Company 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ome merits and demerits in the society. Which leads to chaoes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22916666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7950655615 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9341046858 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270639871365 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777052882266 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524865093542 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142559627733 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623490281644 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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