You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes.
Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:
say which advertisement you are answering describe which course(s) you want to teach
What it/they would be about
Explain why you would be a suitable teacher
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in teacher vacancy you have just advertised on college information board. Please allow me to give more details.
From your notification, the night classes on Friday have such a scarcity of instructors and the community college needs to recruit urgently qualified candidates to fulfill the teaching programs. The nanotechnology course is actually a new field in academic curriculum. Thus, the courses are necessary to have proper persons who have gained profound experience and knowledge to impart the lessons to students.
About the qualification, I have worked for the world’s foremost company in applied science and nanotechnology is a part my current work in which I was in intense training to become an expert. Furthermore, the master degree that I intentionally pursued has recently been granted from national university of sciences. Hence, this would be great to apply my skills and expertise efficacious for education. This, as I am sure you are expecting, is both beneficent and suitable for your college.
Your prompt attention for this application is greatly appreciated.
Haki
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43093922652 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12838931307 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707182320442 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5367193237 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275523337669 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834695861583 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604454754085 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13541737888 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336638945326 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 8.71597938144 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 7.59969072165 132% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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