Dear sir,
I would like to apply for the job vacancy mentioned in the advertisement for tour guiding.
I have been living in this city for about 15 years
Therefore I can say , I have the sufficient knowledge required for the job such as knowing the places of interest and their history.
Beside my information of the city and historical sites of it , I have worked a translator before so I am well-capable of communicating with visitores all around the world as I can talk fluently in english, spanish, arabic and persian.
After all I have studied as architect engineering and done a lot of historical Building and landmarks as a student.
My education left me with loads of student loan. Because of that I should even work on my weekends , thus this jub really fits me.
best regards
Dela jones
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n living in this city for about 15 years Therefore I can say , I have the suffici...
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Suggestion: ,
...for about 15 years Therefore I can say , I have the sufficient knowledge require...
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Suggestion: ,
...n of the city and historical sites of it , I have worked a translator before so I ...
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...f that I should even work on my weekends , thus this jub really fits me. best ...
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...nds , thus this jub really fits me. best regards Dela jones
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so, therefore, thus, well, after all, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 679.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 141.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81560283688 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81611564575 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68085106383 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.7634216954 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 4.34317383033 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166670500614 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633148622947 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726824009884 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866807924109 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707784004905 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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