You just moved into a different house , write a letter to your English speaking friend.

Essay topics:

You just moved into a different house , write a letter to your English speaking friend.

Dear Lizzy,

How are you and your family? I hope everyone is doing great. I am writing to let you know that I and my family have finally moved into a different house last weekend. The housing agent, found us about three different residence, but we finally made our best pick. You know that the main reason we have decided to change house is due to the incessant increase in the house rent by the owner and we couldn't keep up with the payment.

Anyways, you really need to see the new house, it's a really exquisite place and strategically located. In addition, it has a good proximity to my daughters' school and not too far from my office.The house is a 3 bedroom house with a lovely garden and terrace for the kids to have some fun.

Needless to say, I am looking forward to having you around so you can check out our new home. I am thinking you and your daughter can come and spend the Christmas holiday with us. You will really love it here, because it's not so chilling like it is at your side.

Looking forward to seeing you.

Warm regards,

John

Votes
Average: 6.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...e in the house rent by the owner and we couldnt keep up with the payment. Anyways, y...
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
..., you really need to see the new house, its a really exquisite place and strategica...
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Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...s school and not too far from my office.The house is a 3 bedroom house with a lovel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, finally, if, look, really, so, in addition, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39393939394 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25772828445 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626262626263 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3262945429 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247364715366 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867017429418 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722821824888 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134592830589 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748473422633 0.0580467560999 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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