Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inquire about the availability of volunteer opportunities in some of the developing countries.
Let me explain to you why I am particularly interested in volunteering activities. On the first place, offering services either to the needy or some social causes really give me immense satisfaction. Furthermore, such activities allow me to interact with people from the various social and economic background that eventually, provide me with excellent opportunities to build my network.
I believe that I have adequate experience to take up this assignment. During my college days in my country, I have actively participated in many such events. For examples, I worked closely with Red Cross, people for physically challenged, Blue cross of India, and many such NGO by participating in their collection drives and assisting in various other activities.
Currently, I am preparing for my final semester, I will be having a month of leave in the month next post exams. Hence, I will be available to participate in volunteer work at that time and I will glad if you could provide me with opportunities to serve some of the African countries.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Akilan Palaniappan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ilability of volunteer opportunities in some of the developing countries. Let me explain...
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Line 9, column 255, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... provide me with opportunities to serve some of the African countries. I look forward to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, look, really, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25615763547 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18916727919 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625615763547 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1137066541 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130852141954 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536752403512 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465496359691 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811995433633 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310340216711 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.