You live in a flat and you have a tenancy agreement which states that you must give three months' notice when you wish to leave. You have paid a deposit of two months' rent. Now a member of your family has a problem and you need to give up your flat and return home as soon as possible.
Write a letter to your landlady. Explain your circumstances, tell her what you intend to do and ask her for special consideration.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mrs Pattinson,
I am writing this letter to inform you that due to some family issues I will have to vacate the flat as early as possible.
As a tenant I have signed a tenancy agreement stating that I must give three months’ notice period before leaving the house. Unfortunately, due to some unforeseen circumstances I will have to leave for my home at the earliest. My grandfather is very ill and is hospitalised and doctors have put him on complete bedrest and medications. Since, there is no one to take care of him except of me I will have to immediately leave for my hometown. I have also resigned for my job and will look for an employment option in my city.
I would request you to please consider the seriousness of my situation and allow me to vacate your flat with one-month notice period. Although, I have two months’ rent in advance, I would be grateful if you could refund me one month’s rent which amount to Rs 10000.
I hope you will understand my situation and provide me with the required help.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Prabhpreet Kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Yours Sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68844221106 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8556865343 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603015075377 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3127701482 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8181818182 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307197892788 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116257458978 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780239657106 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170488464853 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063574742682 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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