Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about my situation in the Royal resident hall.
I have been living here since this summer semester and my roommate joined me last week. He is a musician who needs to practice with his instrument every evening. Therefore, these load sounds distract me to do my assignments on my designing course, which is required full attention.
As well as this, to perform duties for my work a large desk is mandatory to revise engineering’s map on it. The roommate’s musical instruments, however, occupied almost all the room’s space and there is not enough space for the desk.
If a room equipped with a large desk and high-speed internet provided for me, I would easily do my work and send the results immediately to my tutor via the internet.
Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Mahmoud Sajjadi
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95364238411 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94252950558 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.721854304636 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9855940472 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1111111111 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141090209451 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060128931858 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401554055773 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849653645003 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417908275268 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.