You play a team sport with some friends. last week a member of the team had an accident and was not able to play with you at the weekend so you decided to write to him in hospital, tell him about the matter explain tell him which team won .
Describe the conditions on the day.
say how you felt about the match.
Dear Raman
I was so sorry to hear about your accident! I hope you are feeling a lot better today and that it is not too boring in hospital.
The match on Friday was very disappointing and score was 2 all, probably because you were not there to score the extra goal. Moreover, The awful thing was that you we were winning until 10 minutes before the end, but suddenly they scored another goal and I was so shocked when I saw the ball hit the block off the net.
I think the weather was to blame. It was a really wet day and the pitch was very muddy,at the end of the game no one could able to see the grass properly due to this Everyone was exhausted. I am not satisfied with the performance because all the members of our team were working very hard for this mess but aftermath were not as per our expectation.
Let us know about when you will come at home? On the next match, I will send someone to bring you at the match, so that you could see the next match. All the team members send their regards to you and I hope that you will fine soon.
Yours truly
Aman
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'all' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'alls'.
Suggestion: alls
... was very disappointing and score was 2 all, probably because you were not there to...
^^^
Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , at
...lly wet day and the pitch was very muddy,at the end of the game no one could able t...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, really, so, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15714285714 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05474397167 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.2143220185 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2384166836 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926755163913 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548809737046 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142828435812 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447872991182 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.85 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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