You read an advertisement from local newspaper about a discount sale at a particular shop. However, when you went to buy the goods you wanted, you found the sale had ended.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to show my annoyance regarding the sale advertisement, which I found falsifying after reaching the outlet.
The tabloid - 'Vadodara Today' had an attractive advert about the 50% discount offered on the garments. I, being a patron since many years, often buy clothes from your shop and have been admiring your collection and quality you offer to the customers. As a result, I always loved shopping at your shop.
However, when I read the advert; I rushed to the outlet immediately. Unfortunately, I could not find a single piece for me. Astonishingly, when I asked the staff; I came to know that the sale was over and there are no items left at discounted rates. Unequivocally, this seems to be a fake ad to attract the buyers to the shop because it cannot happen that the sale stock can run out so fast on the same day.
Moreover, it is a shame for reputed outlets like yours to portray such incorrect information. I would insist you to write an apology for the same and publish it in the tabloid. Admittedly, this type of incident not only annoys the client but alleviates their interest in buying. I hope you would take immediate steps to apologize on this mistake to retain the customers visiting the outlet.
I look forward to hearing from you on this matter.
yours faithfully,
XYS
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75757575758 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72983023236 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679653679654 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6832374181 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280804366087 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797298345831 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592775991659 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139687372403 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479840421872 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.