You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference.
Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter:
describe what type of presentation you have in mind
what topics it would cover and how long it would take
who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted
Dear Mr Jackson,
In this letter, I would like to ask you for an approval for the organization of a presentation on October 17. It will demonstrate the information that I learned at the information technology conference in Moscow city held on September 30.
For the presentation, I intend to organize my ideas in the form of pie chart. It seems the best method of conveying large figures to the audience. Furthermore, the presentation will include many pictures as well as video material. At conference I shot plenty of both photos and video clips, so it would be useful for the listeners to see them. It will allow them to understand how efficiently the workflow is arranged in large corporations.
The presentation will be mostly aiming at project managers, because they will discover how quickly to integrate the latest technologies by Microsoft and Oracle companies. Besides management, senior developers can also attend it, since they will be able to take notes and then prioritize the future integration into their teams. As for the place, the main hall appears to be the most suitable venue, as it is spacious and well-lit. The only things that I need are loudspeakers and an interactive whiteboard.
If you have some questions relating to its structure, you can send me a message to my email “tolikfdfxxx@mail.ru” or call me on the following number 87001444413.
Yours sincerely,
Tolegen
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, so, then, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18103448276 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48188097084 2.54303337028 137% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650862068966 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3565818692 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4615384615 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185525724189 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554418382057 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647496613283 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109827805382 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831357878048 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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