You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference.
Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter:
describe what type of presentation you have in mind
what topics it would cover and how long it would take
who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted
You do NOT need to write any address
Dear Sir,
Warm regards! My name is Munish Jazz and i have been working as an English Language Tutor at your extremely prestigious institute since 2017. Luckily, this year i was given onus to attend the "Global Meet For Language Development" as a representative from our university. Thus, i am inscribing this epistle to request you for bestowing a kind gesture by permitting me a chance to share the acquired knowledge with my fellow colleagues.
Since I have an expert hand at multi-media devices, therefore this presentation would be a short documentary prepared by me with few interview sections. Moreover, i will endow other teachers with proficient methodologies to be practiced for exceptional language proficiency. Interestingly, this would also cater the guides with aspired competencies needed in classroom settings.
Although, i had undergone a language development workshop, still all pedagogy trainers could be the part of this presentation. I heartily request you to grant me the desired amenities for organizing this seminar. Also, i will be very thankful to you for your this act of kindness.
Hope you would reply me at your earlier convenience
Yours Faithfully
Munish Jazz
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nstitute since 2017. Luckily, this year i was given onus to attend the 'Glob...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...presentative from our university. Thus, i am inscribing this epistle to request y...
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Message: Use simply 'colleagues'.
Suggestion: colleagues
...to share the acquired knowledge with my fellow colleagues. Since I have an expert hand at mult...
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... with few interview sections. Moreover, i will endow other teachers with proficie...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ded in classroom settings. Although, i had undergone a language development wo...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ties for organizing this seminar. Also, i will be very thankful to you for your t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enience Yours Faithfully Munish Jazz
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43915343915 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29662325232 2.54303337028 130% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671957671958 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6897459756 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156229288372 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676739656849 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567483386844 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107765739936 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447286934077 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 8.71597938144 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.