You recently attended a job interview which went well but you are still waiting for the decision. Write a letter to HR manager of the company.
Give details of job
Why do you think the interview went well
Why do you need to know the result
Dear Sir,
I am writing regarding a job interview which was conducted on 5th december 2018.I was also one of the interviewee who attended the interview but still waiting for the results.
I saw an advertisement for the position of Sales Manager on "The Times"newspaper. I was quite excited as the job offered a handsome salary with weekend off.Moreover, it was a white collar job with adequate allowance for employees.
In addition, my eligibility for the position was promising because I had an experience of 10 years in this field. Besides, I was confident during the whole process of hiring and dealt intelligently with the questions. Although, I have yet not received the results, I am still hopeful for the positive response.
It would be great if you provide me the result as soon as possible because I have got another job offer.However, I still prefer job in your firm as I am more comfortable with the job duties mentioned by your company.
Hope to get a prompt reply
Yours faithfully,
Anna Simpson
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hich was conducted on 5th december 2018.I was also one of the interviewee who att...
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...w but still waiting for the results. I saw an advertisement for the position o...
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...ager on 'The Times'newspaper. I was quite excited as the job offered a ...
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...ered a handsome salary with weekend off.Moreover, it was a white collar job with adequat...
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...dition, my eligibility for the position was promising because I had an experience of 10 years...
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...le because I have got another job offer.However, I still prefer job in your firm as I a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04046242775 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19264624982 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653179190751 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.3349521131 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 4.34317383033 219% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168324996581 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059070062956 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617895959306 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848771126185 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694263007878 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.