You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.
In your letter,
say where you think you left the papers
explain why they are so important
tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir,
I had attended a seminar on microbiology which was conducted in your hotel Yug. My name is Molly Bakers and my registration id is BVFTH. I am writing this letter to inform you that I had unknowingly left my envelope of important documents in the conference room and would like to request you to help me retrieve them.
The microbiology conference was schedule from morning 9am to afternoon 2pm on 16th October. The organizer of the event had informed us that a special tour to the lab was arranged for us after the conference is finished. Due to some technical reason, the conference got extended by an hour and by the time it ended, we all were in so much hurry to leave for tour that I in all probability left my envelope on the table. I realized it was missing after I reached home.
The envelope has copies of my degree marksheet, transcript and notes for my examination preparation. I can easily replace the the copies of my degree marksheet but replacing transcript and notes for my exam preparation would be a tough assignment considering I need to submit the documents by next week and have examination next month.
I would like to request you to ask your staff perform a thorough search of the conference room TULIP and also check the lost and found department. Please contact me in my cell 9994443322 if the documents are found. I would make arrangements for them to be collected from your hotel or would personally come and collect them.
Yours Sincerely,
Molly Bakers
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 122, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ation preparation. I can easily replace the the copies of my degree marksheet but repla...
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Line 4, column 122, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ation preparation. I can easily replace the the copies of my degree marksheet but repla...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 264.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67424242424 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81205549492 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556818181818 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1251806107 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9230769231 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.30769230769 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16185088997 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054119044517 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782205905474 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107358520023 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104129851152 0.0580467560999 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.