you recently attended a meeting at a hotel. when you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you in reference to some important documents I forgot at your hotel. I had hosted a meeting in your hotels business centre on the 25th of November, the conference room "Aries" was booked for the whole day.
After the meeting finished, we wrapped up and left the conference room, when I reached home I realized that I had forgotten some important files. I tried searching my bag but could not find it but then I realized that I probably might have left them at the hotel. The papers included non-disclosure and bi-lateral agreements, These documents were kept in a blue transparent file near the projector table.
As you are aware these documents are confidential thus I would ask your immediate help on this matter and tell me as soon as you find the file. I would come and collect the files from your hotel.
I look forward to your earliest response on this matter.
Yours sincerely
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to you in reference to some...
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Line 10, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ponse on this matter. Yours sincerely vinshu
^^^
Line 11, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this matter. Yours sincerely vinshu
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79754601227 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80276125656 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650306748466 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6727469604 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8888888889 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308649259435 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105937810042 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987245994407 0.0603063233224 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156604093496 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978929543956 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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