You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken.
Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter
1. Describe the problem with the equipment
2. Explained what happened when you phoned the shop
3. Say what you would want the manager to do
Write at least 150 words
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that the brand new microwave I bought from your store in Down Town Beach last week is not functional.
I bought the appliance to easily warm up cooked food but unfortunately, it did not serve its purpose for even once. At the store, the equipment seems to work properly but when I brought it home that was not the case. Firstly, I heard a loud sound inside and then later smoke starts to ooze out of it. I think there might be a short circuit. As of now, the power light cannot be switched on.
Let me explain what happened when I called the customer service to report the problem. I called for over one hour and no one bothered to pick up and when one lady finally did, she promised to send a technician with a replacement immediately but until now no action.
I am exceedingly displeased with the quality of the product I purchased and the service given to me. I hope it would be improved next time. Also, I need a replacement by tomorrow afternoon.
I am expecting to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Martin Oben.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 102, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... purchased and the service given to me. I hope it would be improved next time. Al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, so, then, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50490196078 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58850915812 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671568627451 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4362758437 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6923076923 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217067655055 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578569545067 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535579671498 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100508239763 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489165542229 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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