You recently made reservations for dinner at a very famous and expensive restaurant in town. However, the meal and the service were terrible. The restaurant manager was not available to solve the problem, so you left without a resolution.
• State what problems you had with the food you ordered.
• Complain about the service.
• Describe how you want the restaurant to resolve the problem to your satisfaction.
Dear sir,
I am writing this email to bring it to your kind attention, the pathetic experience that we as family had at your restaurant. To begin with, as this is one of the famous restaurants in town, we had a lot of expectations out of it. However, all our experiences turned out sour after we were served food. Firstly , although starters were hot, they were raw in between. This indicated that chefs did not pay much attention to cook it properly. In addition, the main course was cold and bland. The spices of the food were sparingly used. Finally, the desserts too were displeasing. It was a bitter experience altogether.
Despite, food being distasteful, we had some expectations out of the services, but those also turned out to be unremarkable.
Now, I do like to request certain measures that you must take so that such a bad experience is not faced by other customer. When a system of feedback is kept in place, it will help in maintaining good quality of food and services. Secondly, restaurant staff should be continually trained. This will keep them abreast with latest culinary techniques and hone their existing skills.
I hope this will act as a valuable indicator to you and anticipate that you will not repeat this incidence with other customers.
thank you
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... sour after we were served food. Firstly , although starters were hot, they were r...
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Line 4, column 317, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...ly trained. This will keep them abreast with latest culinary techniques and hone their exis...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thank
...t this incidence with other customers. thank you
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80542986425 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78006398898 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651583710407 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1482986656 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135277145855 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474160019562 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392227407858 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647041653894 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413761137467 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.