You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.

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You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.

Dear Chris,

I feel very happy to receive a letter from you after a long time and glad that you seek my suggestion about continuing your education or taking up an employment. Well, I would say that each option has it’s own pros and cons. However, I suggest you why, it is advantageous to start your professional career early.

Let me explain you in more detail. Having a job will give you a sense of being independent and secured. You can gain invaluable work experience and will give you an opportunity to progress in your career faster. Moreover, most organizations encourage their employees to take up part-time study so, you can check with the prospective employers regarding this option.

Finally, considering the current financial situation of your family, I strongly suggest you to try to find a job and support your parents. Hope you consider my suggestion and let me know if you need a reference letter which will help to secure a job. Hope to hearing from you soon.

Your Friend
Samuel

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8901734104 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74891806041 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670520231214 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.724696626 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9090909091 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248864578968 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101134971721 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540114805846 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175205730494 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347004851499 0.0580467560999 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.