It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Each person is unique in this world and has a special skill. Some believe that people are exceptionally skilled by birth in a sport or music, while others believe that with proper training, anyone can manage to acquire such abilities. I will discuss both these arguments in this essay and explain how a structured training program will help anyone to achieve expertise in a game or music.
Human brain is extremely complex and neurologists have managed to understand it’s functions to some extent. According to them, each part of the brain is responsible for a specific talent: A well-developed right hemisphere increases one’s analytical ability whereas the other well-developed half influences artistic powers. A team of doctors from the University of California recently carried out a research on a large numbers of musicians, singers and sports personalities to prove it; however, no concrete evidence has been established to support their theory. Therefore, it can be understood that people does not acquire a special talent when they are born.
Contrary to the above idea, many would argue that if proper coaching is given to children, tailored to suit their individual interests, any child can develop necessary knowledge and the ability to excel in a sport or in the field of music. For instance, Desmond Jones, an American singer, was born in a family of highly educated intellectuals but, was not good at academics. His parents engaged a singer to train him for about five years and he has become a renowned singer in the USA when he grew up.
To summarize, some may argue that children are born with special skills whereas, I believe that anyone can achieve excellence in a specific area if they were given professional training.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...sity of California recently carried out a research on a large numbers of musicians, singer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11805555556 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8556784993 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642361111111 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.2113779253 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273245532434 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854233874139 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519629546585 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144229365016 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379715381834 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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