It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some people argue that for becoming a professional sports player or an artist one should have it in its genetic while others believe that any ability can be gained through learning. In the following both viewed will be discussed.
On the one hand, human genetics play an important role in its natural abilities. For example, some families have a knack for art, in other words, they all show different artistic talents such as drawing, playing various instrument or writing. After studying such families, scientist realized that they share particular genes that contribute to their talent. For instance, they are extremely sensitive, observant and emphatic. Although inheriting artistic genes does not necessarily result in becoming a successful musician or actor, it is probably more likely to turn that way.
On the other hand, there are many counterexamples which show how people learned something entirely different from the norm in their family or what others thought would be their talent and surprisingly succeeded. For instance, a kid born in a family line of doctors becomes a talented musician! Hence, it cannot be said that people came to these world with specific skills and cannot be taught others they lack. Mind is a mysterious thing; with its astounding learning ability nothing is impossible. Therefore, I strongly believe that people have the power to shape their future as they want and nothing should prevent them from achieving their dream occupations. Besides, if we settle down with the belief that our future is determined from birth, we give up pursuing our dreams and who are we without our dreams?
In conclusion, although people are blessed with some talents from birth, it is up to them whether to put their gift into use or learn something different to realize their own ambitions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16891891892 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.638424835 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3786270117 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.692307692 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230766767473 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079158695007 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779759834449 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146910964564 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886414283703 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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