Many argue that inborn talent is required for people to succeed in any particular game or in playing an instrument. Whereas, others opine that, such skill can be gained by anyone by getting proper training. I believe, innate talent helps to achieve success with an ease, however, people can acquire related skills by sheer determination and constant practice.
Many people are blessed with certain talent may be by luck or by inheriting their family gene. It is quiet evident that individual's with an innate talent can achieve expertise with little effort. For instance some of the famous players and singers have shown their talent right from their childhood. A musician named Alan Walker showed abilities to Mix music and produce an amazing outcome right from a very young age. Similarly, a famous footballer Mess, showed his running and dodging skills when he was 7 year old. Having said that, it does not mean that they do not need practice, to master these skills and to achieve success a passion and determination is of utmost importance.
On the other hand, people argue that such skills can be taught and mastered as well. A person can become a good sportsman or a good guitarist, by practicing the required skills on daily basis. Although, people without inborn talent have to put extra offer in learning things, but it is possible to master them by constant practice. For instance, a comparison between acquired and innate skills showed that an individual who lacks talent, if he keeps learning and practicing his skill will be more successful those who are born with talent but do not put extra effort in honing them.
In conclusion, mastering a skill required to become a successful sport person or a musician can be gained if a person shows a level of determination in achieving it. Although, this does not mean talent is irrelevant, an individual born with inherited skills requires less effort to achieve the same. So for them, to succeed in that particular area, they need to hone their skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ertise with little effort. For instance some of the famous players and singers have shown t...
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Line 3, column 576, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'to practice'?
Suggestion: to practice
... it does not mean that they do not need practice, to master these skills and to achieve ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, similarly, so, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92375366569 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56971157589 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527859237537 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8225417688 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.9375 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262261189064 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912229960804 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495439577584 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17192953016 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127305567565 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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