Some people think that the government should ensure the healthy lifestyle of people, but others argue that it should be decided by individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are different opinions on whether it is the government responsibility to guarantee a healthy society by dictating a lifestyle accordingly or it is individuals right to make that decision by themselves. In my opinion, although government play an enormous role in the way we live, people are the one who have the final say in every aspect of their lives.
On the one hand, the government has the power to impact our lifestyle in a positive or negative way. For instance, by enforcing companies to offer better health care packages to their employees. In addition, studies show that companies that provide several healthy meal during office hours have healthier and happier staffs who state they would have skipped lunch if they had not been offered the free food. Besides, government has the media and the budget to raise awareness towards the value of exercise or healthy diets. Campaigns can be organized to advertise the better way of living, to encourage people to be cautious with their life.
On the other hand, people make the ultimate decision since in a democratic community everyone has the freedom to choose his/her lifestyle. The reason why such law exists to prevent authority from depriving civil right of choice is to protect those not been considered normal by society. For example, some people consume more food than what considered to be adequate. Nevertheless, they lifestyle cannot be labeled unhealthy based on this simple observation since people have various metabolism. Therefore, one remedy does not apply to all people as they have different personality, jobs, and genetics.
In conclusion, although government can guide the society in the right direction by installing some law or raising awareness, it is up to individuals to take care of themselves and make rational decisions regarding their health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21476510067 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79308548326 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593959731544 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9127033767 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.538461538 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161507177314 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581323514162 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358278727047 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951617434707 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316678637654 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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