Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? what are the effects on society and family life?
The number of people who avoid pregnancy till get older is dramatically increasing. Different factors contribute to this new trend such as working females. In the following some of these reason will be discussed along with probable effects of such change.
First of all, women as primary care takers of infants would rather continue their education and work to earn their independence. Therefore, they are less inclined to put their future at risk by getting pregnant and taking on the new responsibility of another human being while based the general perception it is the mother's duty to care for her offspring. Moreover, with the tough economy couples do not feel secure enough to add another mouth to feed. Kids are quite demanding and they rely on their parents to provide for their various needs ranging from nourishment to emotional support. Taking on a journey of bringing up a child not only requires financial stability but also psychological preparation, which young adult are not capable of offering due to their own struggles. Hence, it is reasonable why people delay the process as long as they can.
The effects of this decision is somehow obvious. In the future, there is going to be a big age gap between parents and their offspring. Consequently, youth will feel more distance as they deem their parent old and unable to understand their mindset. On the other hand, parents are not young enough to put up with a noisy toddler or handle a rebellious teenager since as people get older they become less energetic or patient. In addition, as people start having kids in older ages, their reproduction ability will be weaker, and thus the birth rate will decrease significantly. As a result, most children will be the only child in their family without any siblings to look up to or support them in times of need.
In conclusion, recent changes in global economy and women empowerment have led to a society where individuals prefer to get to older ages so that they would be mature and stable enough before thinking about bringing another person to this world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'mothers'' or 'mother's'?
Suggestion: mothers'; mother's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... delay the process as long as they can. The effects of this decision is somehow ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93465909091 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63295571026 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599431818182 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0805872677 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5625 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143103917903 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463511473413 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301511804052 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078210570606 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375132833095 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.