It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, It is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views
There is a varying notion about how one can achieve success at a particular sports or performing arts such as music. some believe that many people are just born to be geniuses and their skills sets are completely out of this world. On the other hand, there is also an opinion that hard work and perseverance in any area of interest can lead to success. Looking at the success stories of renowned players and professional singers makes me believe it is a blend of both natural talent as well as conscientious work in their undertaking.
To begin with, many people born as child prodigies have a knack of excelling at creative and physical activities, often to such an extent, that others are left to wonder how. many often go on to maintain their competencies by keeping at what they have known best from birth. there are some exceptional players, for example, Sachin Tendulkar who is often believed to possess god-gifted talent for winning matches from hopeless situation because of some unparalleled hitting abilities. that is why not many others have had a career as illustrious as him
On the other hand, it's also argued by others that there is no such thing as having natural gift for doing sports and composing music and anyone who has a passion and dedication to do well can do wonderfully well by proper instruction. Moreover, people assuming themselves to be smart and intelligent are often considered to take things for granted and risk escaping practise and preparation, an ingredient vital for success. Even the world famous martial artist Bruce Lee was quoted as saying that if we practise same thing over and over, we become a master at it but if we presume we are already master, we flounder.
In conclusion, those are average people who are either born with some better traits or toil hard on what they do. However, if those who have an early talent can complement their natural skill with diligent effort, they can become legends. Innate qualities and inborn aptitude for arts and sports with regular exercise and rigorous practice probably make the right recipe to achieve extra-ordinary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89693593315 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63454386524 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573816155989 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.5611865425 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.230769231 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6153846154 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246871926476 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851382277505 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404311658422 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146318119493 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019466169147 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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