You are working for a Company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letterexplain why you want to take time off workgive details of amount of time you needsuggest how your work

Essay topics:

You are working for a Company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter

explain why you want to take time off work

give details of amount of time you need

suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Dear Mr Thomas,

I am writing regarding a week-long leave from work that I will need because of an emergency. I will, though have Mr Shyam taking interim charge of my responsibilities till I arrive.

As you know, my father has been a chronic asthma patient and recently his physical condition has deteriorated further. He was admitted in the hospital yesterday and the doctor has suggested he will not be discharged until his condition gets stable. As my wife and children are on a holiday to the USA, I am the only one left here to take care of him. It seems he might need to stay there for at least a week. Even if it takes longer, an alternative arrangement will be planned to look after him and I will be back in the office on Monday 8 september.

I am aware that we will be having many clients at our office to discuss about the progress at the work on their projects. Mr Shyam who is on a leave from the work at the moment has agreed to attend to my duties while I will be on a week off from work. I would be, therefore, grateful if you can grant me a leave from september 1 to september 8.

Thank you for understanding. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Jack

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, therefore, while, at least, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39647577093 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62279221208 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607929515419 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1842861875 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7692307692 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169547917994 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695138233919 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481332808595 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106177606498 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446152272731 0.0580467560999 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.