You are working for a company. you need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.write a letter to your manager. In your letter-explain why you want to take time off work-give details of the number of leaves you need -suggest ho

Essay topics:

You are working for a company. you need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.

write a letter to your manager. In your letter

-explain why you want to take time off work

-give details of the number of leaves you need

-suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing this letter to let you know that I will be required time work off during January.

The webinar and the training program will be organized by the United Nations. I applied for the same six months ago and yesterday, I received a confirmation e-mail from their behalf for attending the training session. This training will help me and our company in getting knowledge about the current issues which numerous countries are facing whether it is related to the nuclear deal, sanitation, eradicating hunger, etc.

Since the training program will be organized in Switzerland, four days will be required for the travel and it will continue till 28th January. So I will be requiring leaves from 1st January till 31st January.

I assure you that no work on my part will be interrupted due to my visit. Because I had already trained one of the employees and e will be handling the work on my behalf.

I would sincerely request you to allow me time off work.

Yours faithfully,

Joy

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 423, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al, sanitation, eradicating hunger, etc. Since the training program will be organ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88571428571 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59458777348 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634285714286 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7120709687 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180612604934 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891998123259 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939043768906 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140954747614 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112702322249 0.0580467560999 194% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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