Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter
describe the problem with the equipment
explain how this problem is affecting your work
say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to tell you that I bought a Dell Laptop from your shop the previous month. The purchase receipt number is 0456724 and the model number of the product is N304067. Unfortunately, it stopped working. First I thought, it was due to charging issue but when I plugged in the charger, even ten it didn't work. Since I work at home so, I request you to fix the issue.
As far as the problem is concerned, initially, some blue patches came out on its screen, then after some time, the whole screen became dark and black. It seems that the laptop was switch on but it's the monitor is damaged.
I work from home as a freelancer and my all work depends upon the laptop. I have to meet the deadlines of the work and the same is to be handed to clients. I am unable to complete the tasks due to this sudden problem.
It would appreciable if one of your services providers will come and repair the laptop, if possible otherwise, replace the same within three days.
Thank you for giving the matter your kind attention. ad I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Ria
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'charge'?
Suggestion: charge
...working. First I thought, it was due to charging issue but when I plugged in the charger...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...n I plugged in the charger, even ten it didnt work. Since I work at home so, I reques...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 195, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...seems that the laptop was switch on but its the monitor is damaged. I work fro...
^^^
Line 13, column 157, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd the same is to be handed to clients. I am unable to complete the tasks due to ...
^
Line 21, column 54, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ad
... giving the matter your kind attention. ad I look forward to hearing from you soon...
^^
Line 27, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m you soon. Yours faithfully, Ria
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51923076923 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36573148645 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639423076923 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.077793625 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1428571429 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160113191783 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492394943955 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612340576006 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0707746904437 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361761391746 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.