A local college is having an international day. You want to speak to students about your country from different cultures. Write a letter to the college head.
In the letter, you should:
tell him/her about the topics you are going to talk about
why would they be of interest to the students
ask for any arrangements that you need.
Dear Sir,
I am a Nepalese student from the school of arts at this University and I am writing to express my interest for representing my country on international day.
As you know, on this day international students have been invited to present about their countries to the august audience consisting of many distinguished guests from the national and international community. my fellow countrymen have decided unanimously that I should be the one to show a presentation about my country this year, especially focusing two popular tourist destinations: kathmandu and pokhara. kathmandu being the capital city of the country which was once the only Hindu kingdom in the world, draws a lot of tourists for its sumptuous temples. The architecture of these better known monuments are unique and worth having a look. On the other hand, pokhara is known more for its natural beauty. Foreigners enjoy the mesmerizing views of the mountains which form the background of the pristine lake situated in the centre of this city. I would like to introduce the popular sight-seeing spots in these cities which will be worth knowing for those who are curious and are considering a visit to the country soon.
Although, I assume there should be a LCD monitor available on the stage of the King's Hall where the program will take place, I would like to request for its prearrangement in the event that it might not have been asked for by other participants.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sanath
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...e national and international community. my fellow countrymen have decided unanimou...
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Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Kathmandu
...st destinations: kathmandu and pokhara. kathmandu being the capital city of the country w...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... Although, I assume there should be a LCD monitor available on the stage of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0157480315 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88931318764 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.2217660318 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.818181818 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169650261618 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636889706989 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647386190353 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10377756275 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391001191566 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 8.62886597938 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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