You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.Write a letter to your new employer. In your letterexplain your situationdescribe your problemstell him/ her when you think you can start.

Essay topics:

You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/ her when you think you can start.

Dear Mr. Samson,

I am writing to inform you that I will be unable to start my new job at your office as a Procurement Expert from the day stipulated in our agreement. my new contract is effective from 1 september 2019 , however, my commitments on the previous project will make it unfeasible.

As you know the program for which I was working as a consultant previously was approaching completion and it was not an ideal time for them to lose a member of staff who had seen the project through almost to the end. Since, there were some outstanding tasks left to be done on the project, my former employer has requested me to provide assistance in completing them. it might take me a week's time to provide them with my support for the preparation of project completion Report. Moreover, I have also been asked to stay one more week with the team to oversee the commissioning after hand-over of the construction works on 9 september 2019.

I would therefore request you to consider my exceptional circumstance and allow me to assume my role at work only from 20 May 2019.

Thank you for your understanding.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
Ram

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...om the day stipulated in our agreement. my new contract is effective from 1 septem...
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Line 4, column 201, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tract is effective from 1 september 2019 , however, my commitments on the previous...
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Line 6, column 370, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... provide assistance in completing them. it might take me a weeks time to provide t...
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Line 6, column 387, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a week' or simply 'weeks'?
Suggestion: a week; weeks
...ce in completing them. it might take me a weeks time to provide them with my support fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72946859903 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87472261976 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661835748792 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2206557342 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234131950999 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114692375468 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101565403137 0.0603063233224 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165780875748 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096600590921 0.0580467560999 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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