You received a letter from your friend informing you about his elderly parents are coming to visit in your area and he is asking for your advise on
- which places they should visit
- where should they live
- Invite them to do something with you
Hi Hyunah!
Thanks for your email.
I am excited that your parents are coming to visit my town. I know they must be equally glad they can make it here finally as they had to put it off last time.
Well, as you already know, my hometown Janakpur Dham is famous for beautiful temples. There are hardly any street where you will not find a holy shrine and I would like to recommend one well known Janaki temple. I guess you must have heard about it from TV documentaries. It attracts a lot of tourists every year. Luckily, there will be a very special ceremony to mark the 100 years of its establishment and they can be sure of having a great time.
As for accommodation, I wish they could stay at my own house. My parents, as you know, are quite welcoming and they will find themselves lucky to have them here and to share their stories with eachother. We have a young boy who helps in the kitchen so eating will not be a problem either.
I would like to treat them on a dinner outside in a restaurant which serves some really yummy local food. If they won't mind I am also planning to take them to boating on a lake.
I hope you would like my idea. Let me know if you think I can do something differently or recommend a better place to put in.
I can't wait to see them.
take Care!
Yours,
Ram
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ually glad they can make it here finally as they had to put it off last time. ...
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Line 11, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ch serves some really yummy local food. If they wont mind I am also planning to ta...
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Line 15, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ecommend a better place to put in. I cant wait to see them. take Care! You...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Take
...put in. I cant wait to see them. take Care! Yours, Ram
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Line 19, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it to see them. take Care! Yours, Ram
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, really, so, well, as for, i guess, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.284 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31745032309 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6477669651 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7058823529 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270779994283 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777966457776 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555547819037 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124692716091 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515603857094 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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