The government should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country’s development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The emphasis on allocating larger budget for science and technology, as compared to other disciplines, is growing across many countries in the world. this is justifiably more productive for national growth and the world and this essay will explore how.
To begin with, no other investments can have higher returns than investment in the development of scientific knowledge. The inventions of technology bring important revenues to a nation by making novel products and services which can be sold internationally. For example, progress in space technology has seen India earn enough money be commercially launching satellites into orbits for many other countries. No wonders why, all countries who are advancing economically have been keeping aside larger funds for scientific research.
Moreover, scientific discovery is a way of finding out solutions to the most pertinent problems facing the world in the modern times which is an unparalleled feature of the discipline. Whenever humanity has come across a problem, science has a found a suitable answer. Take for example the outbreak of a deadly disease dengue. Had there been no enough commitments by the governments to sponsor reasearches into the health sector, there would be higher amounts of money spent on the directionless treatment in absence of right diagnosis and also resulting into greater risk of mortality.
On the other hand, subjects like arts, history and geography are important but they don't warrant a special budget allocation. Firstly, these disciplines place lesser demand of monetary requirements as their researches don't involve setting up physical labs with expensive devices and equipments. In fact, the arts exhibitions and music festivals, which are examples of promotional and developmental events for such disciplines, can be managed even on a low budget. Secondly, these disciplines are more related to the themes and topics that are not urgent or emergency in nature. For example, music and arts only helps to add thrills to our life and make more fun and this is the responsibility of each individual to ensure they have it in theirs.
In conclusion, governments can afford to extend their financial support more to the realm of science and innovation than to some other lesser important subjects. investment in science draws greater dividends and solves the most pressing problems of the contemporary society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40691489362 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98269942656 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1537891174 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.588235294 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216470357438 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626331339822 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501416348201 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117280426988 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455686264404 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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