Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that coursework of high school students should essentially consist of voluntary community work. In my opinion, such arrangement is warranted as it will encourage young people to develop interests for their community and help them with vital social skills.
First and foremost, children need to have a sense of responsibility for their society. Since, a society invests resources heavily in a child in many different ways for his all-round development, children are obliged to repay this contribution by providing services to the members of the immediate community. Currently, a growing number of people seem to lack concern for the place where they grew up and received education as many go abroad for further education and work.
This trend has seen community efforts for raising children go in vain. Therefore, it is imperative that unpaid community services are made obligatory for pupils in high school for them to provide with insight into the real challenges facing their community, develop sincere concern and encourage them to find solutions with a selfless attitude.
Moreover, children appear to live in an isolated world with little or no real interaction these days. In order for the high school boys and girls to develop vital social skills such as interpersonal relations, leadership and effective communication, it is essential that the educational institutions provide an opportunity for the students to participate in community service where they can learn these useful people skills. To illustrate, Nepal has recently introduced a module for their senior students in high school which mandates them to complete a given project in the community. The first batch of students who were involved reported that they could learn many social dynamics by getting involved in activities such as teaching music and sports to kids in the locality.
To sum up, it really is important for schools to make voluntary work in community a mandatory requirement. such voluntary engagements will help students develop interests in their own immediate neighbourhood and nurture social skills.
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Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40361445783 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89606045075 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542168674699 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.6277358596 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246771123233 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955217882232 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483889882303 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147680115373 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314818163128 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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