write a letter to an organizer about the hotel you stayed who booked the hotel for you
meeting details
What you did not like about the hotel
what you want organizer to do
Dear Mr. Samson,
I am writing with regard to my recent experience at the Star hotel in London, which was mostly uninspiring and exclusive service for the booking of which was obtained from you.
To begin with, the hotel manager didn’t have the details of my booking arrangements on his records in the online system. after, showing the copy of my booking which I received from you, they offered to provide a double room as an alternative. Although, I had to stay out late, I still missed the opportunity to spend quality time in a more relaxed environment during mornings and evenings, which the suite, as per the original plans, would have provided.
I didn’t find my stay enjoyable because of the changed arrangements. Moreover, after complaining about the noise I was subjected to from their electric generator plant, I was asked to shift to another room on the second day, which meant I had to climb stairs all the way to the fifth floor. With lift out of operation, it was extremely time-consuming and tiring.
I would therefore, request for a justification on what probably could have caused such a confusion and would like to know if there could be a compensation of any sort for the inconveniences
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Sam
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 127, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...ts on his records in the online system. after, showing the copy of my booking which I...
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Line 10, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation of any sort for the inconveniences I look forward to hearing from you soon....
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Line 14, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aring from you soon. Yours sincerely, Sam
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93636363636 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87179213779 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631818181818 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6739717701 44.8134815571 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 4.34317383033 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167636871757 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576228783399 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512030306466 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945633175274 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436036858033 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.