write a letter to an organizer about the hotel you stayed who booked the hotel for you
meeting details
What you did not like about the hotel
what you want organizer to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about the condition of the hotel, where I stayed for an urgent meeting. My company Pakistan telecommunication private limited sent me to turkey for settlement of a project. The meeting was on 23rd of October at the Turkey hotel. I stayed in the hotel from 22nd to 24th of October in Room number 406.
Firstly, The Room was quite spacious and after the session, I was so tired that wanted to sleep immediately. But when I switched on the air-conditioner it was not working properly. I had to open the window, so that some fresh air can reduce the heat in the room. Secondly, The Refrigerator was also not working at ultimate temperature and all the drinks were hot. Finally, It looked like bed sheets were also not changed after the previous tenant as there were spots on them.
This was extremely frustrating, however I complained about the situation to the hotel manager, But to no avail. As the arrangement were not according to my requirements and service was really pathetic, hence I want you to refund half of my money and also report about hotel condition to its owner. So that other visitors do not face the same issues in the future.
I want you to send the settlement in my bank account.
Yours faithfully,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 299, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ort about hotel condition to its owner. So that other visitors do not face the same iss...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, look, really, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70852017937 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76801145768 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591928251121 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1939198067 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7692307692 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214156113598 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647353563336 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688684653231 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139956892793 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072352421174 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.