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You had just missed a friend’s party, white a letter apologizing and stating reasons why you could not attend the party. ask how fun was it

Essay topics: You had just missed a friend’s party, white a letter apologizing and stating reasons why you could not attend the party. ask how fun was it

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Dear Anna,
I’m overwhelmed to know that you got your soul mate. I know that your engagement party was one of the most important events of your life and desperately wanted to come but i had to go to turkey for a project. I am extremely devastated and hope that you will forgive me.

I was tremendously excited to attend your party, selected a fabulous evening gown too with matching red stilettos and golden accessories. But as you know, my office life is quite hectic these days, working with foreign client on a project to streamline their management reporting and regulatory accounts. They could not convert the project into the process and had technical issues. My boss wanted me to leave on the next flight for turkey to sort out things, as it is most influential client of ours.

Anyway, I hope you had time of your life, dancing and drinking. I want you to send me loads of pictures, especially you and the groom with all of your friends and family.

I hope to hear from you ASAP. Don’t forget to send snaps on my email ID.
Best wishes,

SAIRA

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...life and desperately wanted to come but i had to go to turkey for a project. I am...
^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d and hope that you will forgive me. I was tremendously excited to attend your...
^
Line 6, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...om with all of your friends and family. I hope to hear from you ASAP. Don't...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67015706806 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53518860688 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628272251309 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.277169197 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3333333333 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198358853551 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712311701264 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439724278156 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123659345727 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288208337674 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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