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You had just missed a friend’s party, white a letter apologizing and stating reasons why you could not attend the party. ask how fun was it

Essay topics: You had just missed a friend’s party, white a letter apologizing and stating reasons why you could not attend the party. ask how fun was it

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Dear Anna,

I am extremely excited to know that you got your soul mate and it was on of the most important decision of your life. I desperately wanted to join but on the other hand official commitments ruined the whole fun. I hope you will accept and apology and will forgive me.
How i waited for this event for the past couple of years. I was over moon to know about it and ordered Gucci latest evening gown with matching stilettos and accessory. However, i came to know that one of our clients in turkey is facing technical issues while converting project – done by us- relating to management reporting, feasibility study and financial modelling into process. We company do not want to face any legal charges, my boss urged me to catch next flight to sort out the things.
However, I hope you had fun of your lifetime and broke all of your previous records. i have seen couple of the events photos on Instagram and loved every bit of it, the decor, the multistory cake, your gown and especially your engagement ring, hoping it did not break the bank account of your fiancé. I want you to send me loads of photos.

Give my regards to your family and hope to see you soon.

All my love,
SAIRA

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: ON_OF_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
... that you got your soul mate and it was on of the most important decision of your ...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...icial commitments ruined the whole fun. I hope you will accept and apology and wi...
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Line 4, column 5, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t and apology and will forgive me. How i waited for this event for the past coup...
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Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ching stilettos and accessory. However, i came to know that one of our clients in...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...and broke all of your previous records. i have seen couple of the events photos o...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53393665158 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34062211943 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656108597285 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8332762557 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114835817855 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465577924096 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428988611431 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763334203968 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366520526387 0.0580467560999 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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