You had just missed a friend’s party, white a letter apologizing and stating reasons why you could not attend the party. ask how fun was it

Essay topics:

You had just missed a friend’s party, white a letter apologizing and stating reasons why you could not attend the party. ask how fun was it

Dear Anna,
I’m overwhelmed to know that you get your soul mate. I know that your engagement party was one of the most important events of your life and you could understand that how much it was painful and depressing for me to not join.

I was extremely excited to attend your party, selected a fabulous evening gown too with matching red stilettos and accessories. But as you know, my office life is really busy these days, working with foreign client on a project to streamline their management reporting and regulatory accounts. They could not convert the project into the process and had technical issues. My boss wanted me to leave on the next flight to smooth out the streaming issue. I hope you will forgive me.

Anyway, I am dying to know every detail of the party down to each minute. I want you to send me loads of pictures, especially you and the groom with all of your friends and family.

I hope to hear from you ASAP. Don’t forget to send snaps on my email ID.
Best wishes,

SAIRA

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, really, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63736263736 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41048533711 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8327645018 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3333333333 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220736296911 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716228305789 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511476988726 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127135923336 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278702595411 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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