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You had just missed a friend’s party, white a letter apologizing and stating reasons why you could not attend the party. ask how fun was it

Essay topics: You had just missed a friend’s party, white a letter apologizing and stating reasons why you could not attend the party. ask how fun was it

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Dear Anna,

I’m overwhelmed to know that you got your soul mate. I know that your engagement party was one of the most important events of your life and desperately wanted to come however, I had to go to turkey for a project. I am extremely devastated and hope that you will forgive me.

I was tremendously excited to attend your party, additionally, I selected a fabulous evening gown too with matching red stilettos and golden accessories. However, as you know, my office life is quite hectic these days, working with foreign client on a project to streamline their management reporting, regulatory accounts, financial statements, feasibility study and financial modelling. They could not convert the project into the process and had technical issues. Therefore, my boss wanted me to leave on the next flight for turkey to sort out things, as it is one of the most influential clients of ours.

Anyway, I hope you had time of your life, dancing and drinking. I have seen couple of them and love the decor, balloons, cakes, flowers arrangement and stage looked awesome. I want you to send me loads of pictures, especially you and the groom with all of your friends and family.

I hope to hear from you ASAP. Don’t forget to send snaps on my email ID.

Best wishes,
SAIRA

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d and hope that you will forgive me. I was tremendously excited to attend your...
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Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...om with all of your friends and family. I hope to hear from you ASAP. Don't...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...th all of your friends and family. I hope to hear from you ASAP. Don't ...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, however, if, look, so, therefore, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90950226244 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72589040342 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638009049774 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5169777619 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4615384615 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187161385103 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647723440277 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464099771842 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113146835093 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172586877139 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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