More and more businesses, as well as individuals, are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face.
Technology is permeating every aspect of human lives. This is apparent in the way in which both individuals and corporations are increasingly using technology to communicate rather than relying on the conventional face to face interactions. The advantages and disadvantages of this development will be analysed in this essay.
On the one hand, many argue that technology has abolished the barriers among people and organizations. The most popular depiction cited for this is the shrinkage of time it took to communicate information from one party to another. For instance, Apple offers round the clock online customer services to its customers and potential customers, which enables their sales representatives to instantly respond to the questions posed by consumers. As a result, Apple’s customer service is well renowned for its promptness and quality of service. Hence, it is argued that online communication contributes positively to build harmonious relations between businesses and end-users.
On the other hand, many contend that communication through technology has a quality of becoming an addiction to the users to the point where it consumes most of their time. For example, a recent survey by Reddit found that an average American spends around 5 hours a day on websites like Facebook and Twitter. Consequently, a large part of an individual’s day, which would be perhaps better spent on productive activities, is wasted. Thus, the negative aspects of disseminating information through such modern means are clear.
After musing upon both the benefits and drawbacks of communication through the internet, it is felt that the merits of this trend outweigh its demerits. It is hoped that technology will continue playing its part in the betterment of the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, thus, well, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46931407942 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20408857262 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602888086643 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5087893323 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.214285714 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144951707555 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461570280324 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679220886693 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905265006829 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803932858153 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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