More and more business and individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating
With the tremendous development in technology, plethora of individuals and business tend to prefer communicating using technology, rather than being face to face. Whether professionally or even socially. As a matter of fact there are surfeit advantages and disadvantages for this tendency, this essay will discuss both.
Need not to deny that, living in this fast paced era, requires a change in the attitude of life. New technologies appeared facilitating people's communication, making it faster and easier. texting and video calling for example, have become the most abundant ways of communication. Business-wise, in the labour market, human resources departments use video calling to interview candidates for job vacancies. In addition to conference calls for meetings between different departments and branches of a company.
Moreover, friends and families living in different countries, can simply talk and see each other with a push of a button on their mobile phones. it's here when we see the main advantages, to save time and connect people from different places.
Nevertheless, disadvantages began to appear, being unable to see each other and have a face to face communication, diminishes the pleasure of it. Facial expressions, body language and tone of voice can not be revealed in a simple texting through a chat application. Which. in return leads to multiple miss-understandings. Not to mention getting more lazy to meet each others and perform different activities.
In conclusion, technology aids in simplifying our lives, however its a great mistake to overuse it. As everything in life, it has its advantages and disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, even so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53725490196 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33191665397 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654901960784 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6472026941 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.25 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26747028857 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637957190526 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808479020787 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123039371263 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116729974794 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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