Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Road infrastructures and networks are important for providing adequate communications between different regions of a country. And there is some opinion in the public that these should take precedence while prioritising investment for development over transport systems that are there for the public mobility. In my view though a well-developed and advanced public transport systems are as important and the governments should ensure they don't get any less attention in terms of budgetary allocation.
Firstly, roadways and highways are important to everyone and only if people of all economic levels are able to make use of them they will serve their true purpose. this will only happen if people who are less well-to-do and cannot afford to have their own cars have some form of public transport as an alternative of travelling from one place to another. On the contrary, if a country is rich and all of its citizens are wealthy and willing enough to own a car, the government should discourage this trend of possessing private cars and instead provide them with dnvironmentally-friendly public vehicles such as electric buses to reduce pollution and subways to avoid congestion on roads.
Moreover, road infrastructures and transport facilities are also collectively seen as means of mitigating the gap between the poor and the rich. For these systems to fulfill their intended purpose, there should be a balance between the construction and management of the road works and the development of the public carrier systems. if there is inter-city bus and rail systems available, people can commute to longer distances easily to work and universities. this will will help to ensure there is no much disparity of commercial activities happening for people across different parts of the country.
In conclusion, the government should invest equally for extending the networks of roads and expanding public transport systems. this will make sure even poor people can make trips between places and economic activities are possible homogeneously in all regions of a country. Furthermore, pollution and traffic congestion can also be controlled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37388724036 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11854613171 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516320474777 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0780248295 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.307692308 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164654453965 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631192594089 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411161399576 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105837151415 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171772460021 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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