While recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience.
To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.
Employers look for academic qualifications, professional experience and individual traits while employing personnel. Importance of exceptional individuals in terms of their personal qualities rather than other achievements is increasingly valued by recruiting agencies while employing new members of staff. In my opinion, character of persons should hold precedence over other accomplishments while recruiting as long as they meet the minimum requirements.
Firstly, people with illustrious academic and professional career often take things for granted when they embark on their new career path. Although having good grades can help understand the theoretical concepts, its only when one is prepared to imbibe the mechanics and working of the real world, which is ever-changing, he will be able to translate his prior attainments to the organizational success in new environment. having qualities such as self-discipline and higher work ethics helps an employee thrive in industry, inspire fellow workers for concerted efforts towards common goal and make an organization meet its intended purpose.
Secondly, soft skills are the real thing of success in the modern world of information and technology. Abilities such as effective communication stem entirely from personal attitude and only a prospective employee who is cooperative and open to others opinion tend to pay attention to the concerns of others. people who are team members are often not the ones who hold high credentials but those who value the mechanisms of group dynamics. people with good attitude often possess these invaluable skills.
In conclusion, hiring agencies and employers should not limit their criteria to the academic brilliance and former work achievements. traits such as personal discipline and positive attitude are equally worth considering while selecting the appropriate work personnel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81949458484 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15328856373 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631768953069 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6384120736 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.333333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157614537472 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583267306301 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602041555521 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991082127282 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774376605438 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.