Some people think cars are the best way to get around a city, while others prefer cycling. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In some modern cities, people commute mostly by private cars while in some other environment-friendly nations people often ride bicycles to schools and offices in city areas. An often contested subject is whether people should drive cars or ride bicycles for mobility inside a city. this essay will examine both positions before arriving at a reasoned conclusion.
First and foremost, many city dwellers have a very hectic lifestyle and they need to move back and forth between many different locations in a day. this often means the necessity of a faster and reliable mode of travel for them and having a private vehicle fulfills that need. Moreover, a car makes it very convenient for the entire family to go and visit relatives together which is not possible in case of cycling. What is more, riding a bicycle on streets for children and elderly can be fraught with danger with fast moving traffic and fumes from buses and trucks to contend with.
On the other hand, many people are concerned that motor vehicles are a threat to our overall health. such worries are not unwarranted as the fumes from the rising number of private vehicles often cause air pollution affecting the quality of city life. Furthermore, lifestyle diseases like diabetes and hypertension are the upshot of people not doing enough physical exercise which is evident in the choice of luxury that the modern cars provide. it is for these reasons, many people feel the need to use bicycles. What is more, moving in cars to traverse even short distances in cities such as Tokyo and New Delhi is extremely time consuming because of the traffic congestion while, bicycles make navigating through these congested roads fast and convenient.
To sum up, people who need to travel in groups and frequently for business have a point in choosing cars. Whereas, those who are driven by the concern for their own health and the well-being of the fellow city dwellers seem to embrace the use of bicycles. In my opinion, cycling to nearby places and only using cars for distant travel is the right balance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, as to, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93447293447 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51163153193 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586894586895 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.001432076 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.466666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137430384551 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047006185861 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495095159339 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882774769887 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064347519531 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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